And now we have come to the end of this past month’s celebration of The Silk Betrayal. Thank you for joining with me in this series of posts, and be sure to get yourself a copy of the novel and a few more to share. Encourage your local library to purch…
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Silk Betrayal: minor characters
As I’ve mentioned before, there are many characters in The Silk Betrayal. I’m not going to go through and introduce every one of them. But I’d like to highlight a few here and introduce them to you:RashulRashul is pure charisma. He’s the Beto O’Rourke*…
Silk Betrayal: religions
The Religions of Eghsal Valley
I’m part of several different online fantasy writing communities. One topic that comes up periodically in worldbuilding discussions is how to handle religion in our imaginary worlds. I’ve always answered that I’m not the least bit interested in any sort of divine reality behind the stories—keep the story focused on the human characters, not whatever gods/goddesses there might be behind the scenes. And leave that unresolved, behind a veil of uncertainty. What does interest me, though, and is part of making a believable world is what the characters within it believe and how that affects the actions they take.
If you look over all my writing, you’d see a wide range of religious ideas and a wide range of character interactions to those ideas (from largely ignoring them to them being a character’s driving force).
Among the people of Eghsal Valley there are three main religions, all three of which place fire as the central source of reality.
The most powerful of these is the pantheonic religion with its powerful, high-caste priests and its temples. This is the state religion, as much as there is one. While it views the fire of reality as central and all powerful, its primary focus is on the gods and goddesses who influence how the fire affects the world as humans know it. There are many deities, some particular to a geographical feature or location, but here are some of the main ones:
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Tiespetre – son of fire, god of physical laws of the cosmos
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Ryo – step brother of Tiespetre, god of customs, social laws, marriage, healing
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Perkwom – son of Tiespetre, thunderer, god of protection and just war; stubborn, strong
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Tiessen – twin sons of Tiespietre so alike they share a name; one is god of horses, one of cattle; guides of sailors, farmers, wanderers, dancers, rescuers
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Kwomnep – son of Tiespetre, god of water (not the sea) offending this god leads to flooding
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Shemo and Humo – brothers, sons of Perkwom; Shemo is lord of death since he was sacrificed to save the world from the sea; Humo performed the rite, making him the first priest
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Paxu – son of Ryo, god of drinks (wine, mate, fire liquor) & music & wild spaces
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Kwona – horse goddess (wild); also the sea sometimes
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Gouwind – cow goddess (tame)
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Aoso – dawn; ambiguous–neither light nor dark; order
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Saeldagtre – Tiespetre’s daughter, conducts sun through the sky
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Deni – river goddess (specific to the Eghsal River)
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Little Fire – hearth goddess–proves ownership; associated with the circle
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Deghmedre – Tiespetre’s wife; earth goddess
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Koly – goddess of death (itself, not the afterlife)
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Torjid, Lokjid, Paljid – goddesses of mountains (each a specific peak, together of all peaks)
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Brilith – goddess of the sea
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Teja, Kiela, Maela – goddesses of lava beds, chaos
The priests of this religion exert their influence over the whole valley, well beyond their numbers.
The second religion is the Enshi religion. It is looked down on by the priests and their followers as heretical, as it values the fire itself but has no use for any deities between the world and the fire. In the capital city of Romnai, where the priests are strong and the temple powerful, the Enshi religion is especially discriminated against. To the west, especially among the fishing families of Jarnur, it is much more accepted, and those of the two religions live at peace. The followers of the Enshi religion have no temples or priests but take a more mystical view of the fire. Using their cord-like belts and a series of ritualized movements, they attempt to be united with the fire.
The third religion is a mystery religion of the soldiers, especially the wolf jati soldiers who wander the valley far from the cities to keep the people safe. For them the fire is central, but not as something to be venerated. Instead, the fire is their rival. They challenge themselves, measure themselves against the fire in feats of strength. They worship those who triumph within their sacred rites. And when they succeed, they worship themselves.
The characters of The Silk Betrayal come from all of these religions. Some are deeply influenced by their beliefs in how to approach the fire of reality. Some are largely indifferent. But these three religions and the interactions among them form a significant part of the backdrop to the novel’s story.
Silk Betrayal character: Jasfer
The third principal character I’d like to introduce is Prince Jasfer Talai, one of the Thirty Princes who rule the valley. That makes him one of the thirty most powerful people in the entire known world…but that responsibility rests light on him—for …
Not a Prologue
When I began writing seriously, I was a prologue skeptic. Too many fantasy novels I’d read or browsed in the bookstore/library had unnecessary prologues, often prologues with a poorly written poem-cum-prophecy or with a dump of worldbuilding informatio…
Silk Betrayal: cover art
Another break from my long-windedness today to simply admire the cover art of the novel. We went through a variety of suggestions for the cover. Usually I’m a fan of a more landscape-focused cover, and we went through a few possibilities in that vein, …
The Silk Betrayal: Marankiya’s epic
Tolkien once gave a now-famous talk about how his impulse to create languages had always been a sort of secret vice for him—and he suspected for a small but passionate number of others. I’ve always admired Tolkien’s language creation, but I am also wel…
Silk Betrayal: Dramatis Personae
The Silk Betrayal has a lot of characters, including seven who are our points of view for different chapters. I’ve highlighted some of those characters in posts this month. As you read the novel, you may find it useful to have a complete list of them, minor and major, in one place. The book itself includes this Dramatis Personae. But in case it’s easier to consult a page online than flipping around within the ebook or print book, here it is, the listing of major and minor characters and the places within the valley where they are encountered:
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Baram – The High Prince
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Jasfer – a young prince whose sister was cast out fifteen years ago
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Yatim – a trained fighter
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Kalvandi – Jasfer’s steward
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Taurav – footman
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Apijet – Jasfer’s mentor
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Tarak – supporter of Dartak in the Assembly
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Sindar – his servant
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Vedu – older member of the ruling 30
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Samatrit – Jasfer’s cousin
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Dartak – an eloquent speaker
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Abhish – head footmen
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Vipak – footman
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Teert – head of servants
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Dhalip – friend of Jasfer’s father
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Arbul – friend of Jasfer’s father, patron of the railroad
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Girmeet – former mentee of Apijet
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Lakanrik – the oldest member of the ruling 30
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Karket – his grandson and likely heir
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Shardash – member of the ruling 30
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Bhainu – member of the ruling 30
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Chaitan – hero of the Mumbler Wars, founder of arcist magic, now infirm
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Pavresh – a young wanderer who wants to learn magic from Chaitan
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Rashul – charismatic leader of would-be rebels
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Ekana – a fisherman and dancer
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Indima – a silk weaver and dancer
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Namrani – a quiet musician
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Jaritta – an outcast with a fire scar on her face
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Iksheen – a poet who deliberately obscures his caste
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Rilef – also learning arcist magic
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Purunrik – supporter of Rashul
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Tanmai – supporter of Rashul, brother of Upeng
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Upeng – supporter of Rashul, brother of Tanmai
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Marankaya – former theological prodigy, now disgraced
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Tanjali – Chaitan’s attendant
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Kapita – Chaitan’s attendant
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Jinsu – Indima’s father
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Ambal – father to two small children
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Datri – Weaver girl, companion of Indima
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Malya – weaver girl, friend of Indima in Romnai
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Charu – weaver girl, friend of Indima in Romnai
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Juki- weaver girl, friend of Indima in Romnai
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Raksh – head servant to Indima’s family
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Shidi – servant woman to Indima’s family
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Phangun – servant to Datri’s family
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Karuda – Commander of the mountain post
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Bhadrik
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Deraj
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Hirsha
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Surjit
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Silk Betrayal: timeline
While I have no plans to do a massive George R. R. Martin style multi-book history of the Eghsal Valley and all its twists and turns, the book does include a broad timeline of the major events of the past 600 years. This is, to be clear, the timeline a…